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lank81
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:54 am    Post subject: I Cry Reply with quote

Just got done "The Boy with the Striped Pyjamas" and this came out...let me know your thoughts

I Cry
I Cry for children who weep for their lost youth
Abolished from their land of make believe
Which once swiftly swayed within the confines of their hearts
For innocence is quickly lost
Where others are stripped of life's beauty
As the willow weeps so do these who are but shocked with life's ugly truth
Veils of disbelief are sewn to cover mind's eye
Yet those who witness truth can not cover their disbelief
I sit with head in hands
And cry for the children who weep for their lost youth


I'm thinking I could add some more but that just came out in a quick sitting
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it. Not exactly helpful, but I felt the same after that movie. Crying or Very sad
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