our first recordings, opinions welcomed

Benmurray85 · Post by **Benmurray85** » Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:31 pm

hi guys i know im not neccesarily a regular CONTRIBUTOR to this site but i do browse on here most days.

this is my first post to the beautifully named whorehouse. basically this is the results of my bands first recording session. any feedback is VERY greatfully recieved. its not perfect by any stretch of the imagination but we are pretty happy with it.

thoughts guys

www.soundcloud.com/wearetheblackwatch

thanks

Dingus · Post by **Dingus** » Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:47 pm

Honest Opinion: I really like the vocals/melodies, and the way they were recorded, not so much sold on the music/lyrics.

Benmurray85 · Post by **Benmurray85** » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:24 pm

fair play, thanks for your honesty

+ve AND -ve constructive opinions are welcomed

THEGREATJONZINI · Post by **THEGREATJONZINI** » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:11 pm

i like it! track 2 is very nice in particular.

nice space jam too! (not the movie)

Mages · Post by **Mages** » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:45 pm

sounds good. and yeah, the second song has some pretty good parts. overall I think there needs to be counter-melody. I would either make the guitar more melodic, or add another guitar with some counter-melodies.